i LOVE the black and white. very fleshly!!! the sans-serif i think works best. and just thinking about when it is constructed you might wanna move the Name and Slogan a bit higher and make the ingredients tighter... just so that when it is a box the texts dont seem tooo close to the edges. very awesome though!!! its sexy. ps. maybe i'm confused but i think the tabs you put the bar code and ingredients on go inside??? idk maybe, someone can maybe clarify
i think im diggin the black and white, that back is just so suggestive and nice
ReplyDeletei LOVE the black and white. very fleshly!!! the sans-serif i think works best. and just thinking about when it is constructed you might wanna move the Name and Slogan a bit higher and make the ingredients tighter... just so that when it is a box the texts dont seem tooo close to the edges. very awesome though!!! its sexy. ps. maybe i'm confused but i think the tabs you put the bar code and ingredients on go inside??? idk maybe, someone can maybe clarify
ReplyDeleteThe rectangular tabs with bar code and ingredients go outside, the tabs with thinner diagonal sides are meant to be inside & glued to.
ReplyDeletenice work. great tagline.
ReplyDeletei love both!!!!
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