i like the last two. the two images connect much better. i like the typefae too it fits in, old style and ur drawings plus the colors make a good composition
i agree with noelis. i like both versions... i think the front with the newspaper background covering the whole square seems more complete.
for both front and back i'd love to see just a little bit of type tweaking. maybe play with scale a LITTLE bit and especially for the track list try jostling the track names so they are not just a centered list. rotate the track names to odd angles (only 3 or 3 degrees) and vary the type sizes by a few points.
i'm also not sure how well the white type reads on those pale backgrounds... although it probably prints darker?
i like the last two. the two images connect much better. i like the typefae too it fits in, old style and ur drawings plus the colors make a good composition
ReplyDeletei agree with noelis. i like both versions... i think the front with the newspaper background covering the whole square seems more complete.
ReplyDeletefor both front and back i'd love to see just a little bit of type tweaking. maybe play with scale a LITTLE bit and especially for the track list try jostling the track names so they are not just a centered list. rotate the track names to odd angles (only 3 or 3 degrees) and vary the type sizes by a few points.
i'm also not sure how well the white type reads on those pale backgrounds... although it probably prints darker?