Hey everybody these are my revised posters. I had taken ill the other day so unfortunately i couldn't put them up for critique. I decided to flatten down the 4119 and make it using simple flat coffins instead. I also changed the font on the Sadam poster, played with the angles a bit more and cleaned it up...tell me what you think.
2 comments:
the coffins poster is getting there, but i still have a hard time reading 4119. what if your poster consisted of a a huge "4119" composed of 4119 tiny american coffins?
the other one is cleaner now, but the composition could be a lot more dynamic and powerful. i would take a look at some russian costructivist posters for inspiration.
i dont wanna seem picky but the second one; i dont really get the message. the first is clear though the number with the coffins is a bit unclear(visually). but the second i just dont know if its pro or anti, or even what the topic is, but its a really cool composition!!!
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