here's some feedback & suggestions: 1. make the spliff bigger. it's kind of hiding on the side. 2. for song titles get rid of that wavy effect. it's cheesy. 3. i don't see at all how the lyrics are designed. the type should be smaller (8 pts.?) it also might be a good idea to use 2 columns on each page. 4. use a better title font. here are some rootsy looking ones i found on dafont.com
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hi kevin,
hope you're feeling ok.
here's some feedback & suggestions:
1. make the spliff bigger. it's kind of hiding on the side.
2. for song titles get rid of that wavy effect. it's cheesy.
3. i don't see at all how the lyrics are designed. the type should be smaller (8 pts.?) it also might be a good idea to use 2 columns on each page.
4. use a better title font. here are some rootsy looking ones i found on dafont.com
http://www.dafont.com/body-hunter.font
http://www.dafont.com/skin-bones.font
http://www.dafont.com/st-andrew.font
good luck,
N
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