Camembert

I need help toning my stuff down. Is this still too literal???







1 comment:

Michael Fragoso said...

Yes. I think you should make the descriptions less "paragraph" and try to incorporate the type more into the overall design of your image. The red and white image is very strong and I love the way you have it set up. however, your font is very "modern" and "futuristic" and that cheesy calligraphic font does not help. Try looking up some of the posters from the Bauhaus or some other similar movement for inspiration?

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