i like the first one, but am not too sure about the placement of the text. on the song list: you cant really see it and maybe its picky but the 14th song title kinda bothers me, of its alignment. on the cover: the name right over the helmet like that its a bit weird. maybe u can move the graphic up and the text down. and the text down and graphic up on the back panel of you cd case. this is all for the top composition, i think the black makes it stronger. but in the pink one everything looks good. the combination of the graphics and text its cool. the alignment of everything makes it interesting too. hope this helped.
haha what don't you know about?? I think both are really successful. I like the colorations of the first one the best, and I actually like the placement of the time on the back but I think the vector shapes shouldn't intersect with the type. Maybe move them up a bit, but I think the script type is nice
I enjoy the script very much, I didn't think you would use a script type for your covers but you pulled it off really well by getting away from the whole digital-techno-disco cliché typefaces.
It's a little hard to see the track list in the first one... I don't think it bothers me that much though I'd like to see what it's like if you moved the helmets up a little.
The shade of pink/purple you picked is kind of weird. It doesn't excite me as much as the black one. It looks almost pastel-like so personally I would suggest a shade that pops/is more in your face. I like the like opaque magenta over the neon green a lot.
i agree with noelis about the 14th song being left alone (we all that a widow in typography).
when i picture the vinyl album cover at full size i think the composition is nice, but a little tame. things are centered on both front and back and don't either A. wow you (maybe blow some of the elements up?) or B. create something new with negative space (as they do on the CD booklet).
while it think it's alright, i'm not 100% sold on the script type. not because it's not working, but because you could move it further away from being cute, which their music isn't really. maybe mess with it in illustrator? something subtle...
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i like the first one, but am not too sure about the placement of the text. on the song list: you cant really see it and maybe its picky but the 14th song title kinda bothers me, of its alignment. on the cover: the name right over the helmet like that its a bit weird. maybe u can move the graphic up and the text down. and the text down and graphic up on the back panel of you cd case.
this is all for the top composition, i think the black makes it stronger. but in the pink one everything looks good. the combination of the graphics and text its cool. the alignment of everything makes it interesting too.
hope this helped.
haha what don't you know about?? I think both are really successful. I like the colorations of the first one the best, and I actually like the placement of the time on the back but I think the vector shapes shouldn't intersect with the type. Maybe move them up a bit, but I think the script type is nice
These look pretty badass.
I enjoy the script very much, I didn't think you would use a script type for your covers but you pulled it off really well by getting away from the whole digital-techno-disco cliché typefaces.
It's a little hard to see the track list in the first one... I don't think it bothers me that much though I'd like to see what it's like if you moved the helmets up a little.
The shade of pink/purple you picked is kind of weird. It doesn't excite me as much as the black one. It looks almost pastel-like so personally I would suggest a shade that pops/is more in your face. I like the like opaque magenta over the neon green a lot.
i think all the comments are pretty spot on.
i agree with noelis about the 14th song being left alone (we all that a widow in typography).
when i picture the vinyl album cover at full size i think the composition is nice, but a little tame. things are centered on both front and back and don't either A. wow you (maybe blow some of the elements up?) or B. create something new with negative space (as they do on the CD booklet).
while it think it's alright, i'm not 100% sold on the script type. not because it's not working, but because you could move it further away from being cute, which their music isn't really. maybe mess with it in illustrator? something subtle...
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